HOW DID YOU DO THIS?!?!? Smart
Great but not without problems
I really enjoyed this animation, especially since I love things synced to music, but there are some things that almost broke the experience for me.
1. Grammar Check. No offence intended but you really should have either double checked your grammar or had someone else look at it before you finalized the animation. It's not horrendous but it was enough to distract me and make me go "Wait, what is he saying?"
2. Reliance on Text. Having text to support the story isn't a bad thing, but over reliance on it is. This is just my personal opinion but I sat through most of the intro thinking "Ok when is this thing gonna start". I'm not saying it shouldn't be in it at all, I just think it could be tweaked to make it a little more enjoyable to watch. (Also the grammar issues I mentioned didn't help things) Like maybe instead of just Exposition then madness action you could have sprinkled the text story over diff parts of the madness action, maybe using flashback or something like that. I dunno that's just an idea.
You have some tremendous potential here man, keep animating.
"I HATE YOU"
Would've checked this sooner but I just woke up, awesome animation mang.
The original was really funny too, but I liked yours better.
Blast form the Past
Used to watch this every, goddamn, DAY as a kid.
Not bad at all though a lot of the jokes were lost on me since well, I'm not from the UK.
Completely Took Me by Surprise
To those saying the ending ruined it, I gotta say go get a sense of humor.
If it wasn't for that ending this would just be another random horror animation, instead it was awesome.
(Also, I was right. This was sort of your Fargo if you don't mind my comparison)
Not bad...but not that good either.
Had some really funny bits here and there(Mainly TheSwain, Utah, Stamper, LazyMuffin and the pretty women thing by Hans) but overall pretty meh.
Gotta say though, that last line after Sahara Pals always makes me laugh.
Hope You Liked it Robert!
Started out kinda slow/dumb but that last off camera argument made it all worth it.
Is....is that a unicorn?!
DUUUUDE! i forgot how awesome this was!
Seriously bro, keep up the awesome work.
"wait I don-OH!"
It took me a little while to get it but got that was funny. Awesome man
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